Mar 2022
Get ready
A bridge about to give
The shell about to crack
Get ready
Alive
Breathing
We listen
The news about to break
The heads about to fight
The good fight
Above
Shifting
Welcome
The wish to take a knee
To hold the comet’s tail
Fleeting
Alive
Releasing
Can you send a secret to me
If I pass a message to you
All round the fastening scar
Brick red and beaming
Get ready
A bridge about to give
The shell about to crack
Get ready
Apart
Can you send a secret to me
If I pass a message to you
All round the fastening scar
Brick red and beaming
To where the casting collides
In flare of chemistry
Rouging bruises bloom
Rouging bruises bloom
Rouging bruises bloom
Daybreak replies
@dugganensis Mar 2022
Love your sound. The key change for the chorus is such a cool surprise. Such yummy arpeggiator synths and hook together. Again, really cool imagery and just enough mystery in the lyrics.
@pippa Mar 2022
I like this, reminds me a bit of Sargent Pepper. I think it's the effects on the voice. But I like the spacing of the words as well.
@audrey Mar 2022
I like the '80s feel and the lively beat of this song. That's a very catchy melody too. Your vocal is great and a perfect match for this arrangement. Great song! I really enjoyed listening.
@edward9thstreet Mar 2022
A good abstract write with some strong imagery. Kept my interest.