This one still feels more like a work in progress or idea than a song. Just quickly got a basic recording done with the current idea. Gonna keep working on it.
maybe its not a given
that i am forgiven
maybe it's for the wrong reasons
that i am living
deep calls out to deep
in the middle of the storm
in the middle of the storm
your waves they sweep over me
and your love, it keeps me warm
you love and mercy
wash over my soul
your my heart's desire
you make me whole
@wylddandelyon Mar 2022
You wrote a very nice, quiet, reflective guitar part. When you've practiced the squeaks away, it will complement this song really well. Your voice is soft and meditative, and it also fits the meaning of the words well. Good luck bringing this to the standard you are so obviously aiming for! I really empathize with wishing for more time to polish both lyrics and playing before making FAWM demos.