Writing prompt #52 a song that emphasizes repetitions
Yeah you. you you. You're on my mind, mind mind. Like all the time time time.
It feels like everything I do, do, do leads me back to you you you.
Yeah you. You you. You're making me crazy. You've penetrated my thoughts, thoughts thoughts. I need to get back to my life, but you've erased me, me , me, me.
@nancycunning Mar 2022
I like how you embraced sparseness. Using just a few words to set up a situation and leaving space for the music to help lead the listener to an emotional palette for this one. The lyrics leave a lot of space to interpret those emotions.