@jorh was very kind to do a lyric and vocal for this one; I still owe pitch and timing correction, but here we are at the finish, so it'll have to be March.
From jorh
Hey,
As promised I’ve come up with some lyrics and melodies for your ace shredtime track! It was a lot of fun and easier than I though considering I haven’t wrote to a full track before.
I have attached a very rough demo - i went very chaotic rock cause the track asked for it!! Apologies for the terrible mixing and shaky singing, I have no musical or production knowledge (or equipment) lol cause usually only write lyrics, but will hopefully give you a feel for what direction I was heading in. If you like it, maybe we can see if we can recruit someone who can actually sing rock lol (not my poor man’s attempt) and would be happy to mix. Let me know what you think :)
Lyrics below - I can’t be trusted:
I'm crazy, off the wall
Going for it all
Let loose, nothing more
to lose
Now I lost you
Waiting for your call
Phone dead like you heart
I gave you my all
When i'm free, I can't be trusted
Owwwww I can't be trusted, arghhh
(I can’t be trusted)
I've lost my sense of smell
Towed the lines of hell
Heaven comes and goes
I'm high
And i'll keep climbing
Craving all the world
Drugs, money and girls
I'll die powerful
You'll be the girl who lost me
Owwwww I can't be trusted, arghhh
(I can’t be trusted)
I'm crazy, off the wall
Going for it all
Let loose, nothing more
to lose
Now I lost you
I'm crazy, off the wall
Going for it all
Let loose, nothing more
to lose
Now I lost it, come owwww-n
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Nothing, now I lost you
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Nothing more to lose
Now, now I lost it, arghh
@chrismyth02 Mar 2022
Cool drums on this. Driving riffs, I like the way the vox follow the guitar in the verse. "I'm high and I'll keep climbing" is a great lyric. The build of the vox and layers at the end is great!
@mistermann Mar 2022
This has got so much character! I know you mentioned timing/pitch correction but some of the micro delays and whatnot actually work with the rattly non-technical punk character of the backing track and the overall performance. This is great!
@sunnymae Mar 2022
Yeah...you start with guns blazing! What a freakin' great rocker!!!!!!
So much energy. Not so rough to my ears, but I hear you. Always more places to go, edits, etc...
Great guitar playing at 1:30 and that cool vocal on top!
I have no problem with this mix. This is raw, balls to the wall hard rock. Great job everyone!!!