Feb 2022 waltz afterlife dreams real-estate
@frogspawn has a much more thoughtful and quiet ghost persisting. @pointlessaccount, well, goes with neighbourhood...
Words © 2022 Stephen Wordsmith, Music Copyright © 2022 TJ Fatchen All Rights Reserved APRA-AMCOS
I bought a house
It's rather nice
Except is has
A poltergeist
He's not too bad
But has his flaws
That mainly touch on
Closing doors
I've never understood
The need (the need!)
To creak a door
With languid speed
If you're about
Ether-e-all
Enough to wander
Through a wall
My ghostly friend
You go too far
Please leave each portal
Half ajar
Except the toilet
Please be kind
You may be dead
But you're not blind
@berni1954 Mar 2022
The spirit of Flanders & Swan hovers over this one!
@thedutchwidows Mar 2022
Very spooky vocal delivery and lovely pay-off. Feels like an end of first half or end of Act I in the musical that I’ve decided in my head that this is. Audience keen for the next part.
@coolparadiso Mar 2022
Ha ha this is even funnier. Perfect easy rhyming makes it lilt along. And the last verse just nails it