Feb 2022 pop piano-pop singer-songwriter satire
This song is about a guy running a creeper forum (or subreddit) who gets a visit from a reporter of a famous news/gossip site. Based on a true story. Recorded on an Ipad Mini 5 using Audio Evolution Studio, via a Centrance MixerFace R4 and and MXL 990 mic. Backing by Chordbot.
Personal note: This song is the most finished I have put together during FAWM this year. That said, along with the obvious (the gang vocals need tightening and I need to add some harmony), the bridge needs some work.
Jesus, don‘t these kids get out anymore
He sighed as he went down the stairs
And closed the basement door
Private, the darkness holds his pleasures for free
The glow of his PC
As he uploads his booty
PC: You shouldn‘t have done, what you did
You‘ve gotten some laughs, but she‘s still a kid
Your friends are all down, and she won‘t know
Until you‘re found out
C: This chant is turning on you
But you can‘t see it yet
Peepers international
Is going down
This chant is running from you
Though you can‘t it yet
Peepers international
Is going down
This group he caters too
Are scrambling for the goods
Salivating the under skirt butt cracks
From unsuspecting girls
Folders of every age group
For all to adore
But he gets a little nervous
When some ask for little girls more
PC, C
Oh my God, who are you
I‘m from Gawker, nice to meet you
How‘d you find me, why are you here
I‘ve just questions, nothing to fear
Please understand I‘m just a man
With two kids to feed and a mortgage to plan
I‘m just letting off some steam
Because my life is no longer fulfilling my dreams
(C) HMS Rother all rights reserved
@wolfkier Mar 2022
The staccato piano seems to be just closing in on the culprit and the gang is coming too...
Again something fiercely cinematic going on here. It's a script, shot by shot, vivid and dramatic, compelling and telling, and then delivering. And acoustically/sonicly your vocal just seems to cut through on all the tracks. What a joy mixing must be! :)
#tit4tat3 , what a pleasure it's been. If I don't hear you or from you sooner, I sincerely hope our paths will cross during 5090!
@coolparadiso Mar 2022
#tit4tat Has an almost show song feel. Pretty powerful. The doubling works well to lift parts. Good strong piano again to hold it all together
Ps i tried to listen to a kiss melts the stone but it didnt go anywhere
@plushbaby Mar 2022
This is a dark and depraved subject for song, but you balance it and deliver it with an emotion that fits and the melody and music is really strong. The pre-chorus is really powerful and I love the double vocals on it. I like how you change up the words on the final PC to reflect the outcome of the story - great closure. Love the piano and singing - excited to check out more of your songs!