Skirmish one hour to write lyrics. Might try to gt a demo made later today..
Agent of change
verse 1
It's a well-kept secret
Every spy knows
Where truth and lies intersect
temptation follows
Chorus
It would be so easy to fool you
lead you astray
Doomed to persuasion
with feet of clay
You won't know what happens till it hits you
You won't know what happens till it hits you
verse2
Such weakness you cover
A conflict so strange
I may take pity on you
my agent of change
Chorus
It would be so easy to fool you
lead you astray
Doomed to persuasion
with feet of clay
The weapon in your shoe no longer fits you
The weapon in your shoe no longer fits you
Bridge
The vacuum will call forth another nemesis
the agent of change might undo us
verse 3
I hope the good guys win
And we don't prop up an evil twin
Where truth and lies meet
Promises of nothing-but oh so sweet
we're all so easily fooled
we've been led astray
doomed to persuasion
crumbling feet of clay
c) Laurie Lyons
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Your lyric travels from specific images to a more universal outlook. Good write.
@porrectus Feb 2022
crumbling feet of clay is my favorite line here. Great tale, wonderfully told. Nice flow. Well done.
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
I love the "The weapon in your shoe no longer fits you" line. There's some really cool phrases in here. Nice skirmish!
@wylddandelyon Feb 2022
There's some very strong images here. Good skirmish. I want to hear this one.
@treble Feb 2022
The lyrics were vivid and i could picture what you were saying. They had a nice rhythmic flow that would go well with music. Good job!
@carleybaer Feb 2022
"The weapon in your shoe no longer fits on you" great line! Let me know if you get a demo up, I'd love to hear it.
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
Really nice write; the arc of it feels very relevant to our times, particularly that last verse... Excellent skirmishing!
@whispermouse Feb 2022
I love the progression throughout this, the chorus changing, the feet of clay crumbling. Nice skirmish!