First time ever accompanying myself and it is a phone recording so hopefully that explains a lot.
I'd like to flesh this out in a full rock and roll style with guitar, bass, and drums and give it a retro taste a la Deee-Lite meets The Smithereens.
Thanks for listening!
Did you get my text?
Did you get my call?
Did you read the writing on the wall?
Here's the deal
I want to spend some time with you
I like the way you dress
I like the way you talk
You're the grooviest guy I ever saw
My love's for real
I want to spend some time with you
Let's start the race
I'll chase you all over town
You’re a three-ring circus
And I am your clown
Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo
I know what you're doing
You're playing cool by design
No one else will do
So I'll wait in line
You're my Galaxy
My sun, moon, and stars
Don't you change a thing
I love who you are
Are you for real?
I want to spend some time with you
This Love's surreal
I want to spend some time with you
This is how I feel
I want to spend some time with you!
@mikeskliar Mar 2022
some great lines here, and some great melody lines here- fun one, and glad you got to sketch this out.... nicely done! love some of those vocal improvs..
@jamesstaubes Feb 2022
Congrats on posting a song! I can certainly hear the Smithereens and Dee-Lite vibe in this. I like this line - I know what you're doing
You're playing cool by design.