Really excited to continue working on this one. Quite a bit of fine tuning needed and some adjustments here and there, but a good start.
Stay
Out of my mind, out of my medicine
Breaking my mind over you
Biding my time, hiding in burned out places
Where at least I can enjoy the view
I know I'm right
And it don't mean a thing
Its about time I was moving on
But I guess I'll stay
I scraped my hands climbing the wall
To see how far that I could see
I swear to you, I saw it all
And it tore through every part of me
I know they're right
and it don't mean a thing
I don't belong and neither do you
so why don't we stay
Now here I stand laid bare to everyone
I'll open myself to that pain
still out of my mind, out of my medicine
Wouldn't have it any other way
Who knows whose right
Like it means a thing
Sometimes it all just feels right
And so you stay
@rshakesp Feb 2022
A nice restrained song, full of space - with sympathetic guitar playing and a heartfelt lyric. I like the intonation of the neither do you line. Good job all round with doe lovely little guitar touches to boot