Feb 2022
Organizing/re-uploading some tracks as I've moved them to Bandcamp.
This was for an impromptu skirmish, theme of "coming of age". The song is basically rambling about getting old.
oh im coming of age
and it feels like 99
im up in a rage
and yet i feel fine
oh im out on the stage
and im not at my home
i dont know what to say
cause im gettin old
oh im comin of age
and the age is pretty old
one hundred and ten
all be--ing told
oh its not what you do
but its just what you say
gonna keep it to my
self every damn day
time to pack it all in
and im feelin my sin
ive been carryin it around
for a long time
and ive come here to say
lets just call it a day
we saw lots of cool things
in the meanwhile
@audrey Mar 2022
This has a tranquil, down home feeling. I like it, especially your melody. It's very catchy. Nice music arrangement too. One thing about ageing and feeling down about it, is that it's a whole lot better than the alternative. My husband always says this, lol and it helps put things in perspective. Always better to try to be grateful. It puts a happier spin on life. Well now, you see how your song got me to thinkin'? That's a good sign. I enjoyed listening. Good song!