Feb 2022 lo-fi girl-with-guitar
Unfortunately I didn't get some good recordings of some stuff and this is one of them - it's the last day so I'll just post what I had, the moment I was writing it on the spot.
Do I hear you
When you speak
Am i even around to listen to you
If a tree falls
Do i catch it at all?
will you do that same thing for me when I can’t stand listening
You said I’m not the one
I want to be the one
I want to be the one to hear you
But what if you find this was all a big mistake?
What will you do?
So for now I can only hear the sound of me me me
I am the most convenient
Most interesting protagonist on the scene
So get with me
This relationship can only have one girl it’s me me me
So you have got to hear me out
You have got to shut your mouth
We could 69
Suck each other wounds
I suppose that would do
Maybe someday you will find that space where you can come undone
But i’m not it hun
Doo doo doo
There can only be one
And I call shotgun
@timfatchen Mar 2022
I have to admit, I found this hard to decipher because of the recording and also the unfinished/writing in progress nature of it, but you gave fair warning. Remember, it is possible to put up locked songs while FAWM is on to give you time to at least clean up a little afterward. That said, the lyric has strength, you clearly have a good voice and what little I can clearly hear, the melody is okay too. The insistent guitar which masks most of the song will work if toned down in a re-recording. Nothing wrong with what's being played, just needs a re-record and some practice to keep the rhythm rolling without interruption.