Guitar tuning: CGDGBD
There’s what you condense
from the nuance of vapor
There’s everything else that
never gets written down on paper
like the look in my eyes
when I hang around you
and you’re so surprised
it’s like nobody ever found you
just the words you say
the smile on your face
the way you occupy your time
the way I wish you occupied mine
I’m just a person in a body
admiring a person who is somebody to me
even if they don’t know they could be
I could tell you how I’m smitten
but it might as well be ghostwritten
@headfirstonly Mar 2022
That first pair of lines is a lovely summation of what sets writers apart from people who do not write. Using another writing term as the title helps it resonates nicely. And this gets what I'm beginning to recognise as your trademark sound: big compression, lots of neat production touches (I'm loving those guitars) and your trademark vocals. This one's definitely a keeper.
@mikeb Feb 2022
I'm not familiar with that tuning, gives the guitar part of this song an interesting sound.
A different-sounding wishing-for-love song!