The drum track is out of sync. Will have to fix that!
New heaven, new earth
The sea was no more
New Jerusalem
A bride is prepared
Adorned for her groom
New Jerusalem
God is with man
He dwells with them
In the New Jerusalem
He removes our tears
Of death there is no fear
New Jerusalem
He makes all things new
He is faithful and true
New Jerusalem
12 gates, 12 pearls
Streets of pure gold
No more night
Nothing unclean
Will hereby be seen
In the New Jerusalem
New Jerusalem
© 2022 Mark Hoffman
@metalfoot Mar 2022
The melodic structure is delightfully catchy. Nice work paraphrasing/summarizing/versifying some of the lovely detail of the New Jerusalem in Revelation. And no worries about the out of sync rhythm track. FAWM goes by fast and stuff happens! Cheers!