Feb 2022
time keeps ticking away
im thinking of how im gonna go and master
the day
a pen and pad leads to a list thats the gist
of how im going to claim my destiny and live bliss
but i must have missed the jump off see
its now 3 pm on my third cup of coffee
i oughtta see
it creeping up behind me
its that nagging awful feeling that reminds me
nobody lives forever
or how long a life will go
will you be remembered
wanna make the most of my window
did you surrender to the divine flow
will you be remembered
wanna make the most of my window
i cleaned my window to a windex shine
by eliminating people and places that waste my time
i signed up and gathered the tools and can attest
to obtaining training i need to be the best
and now the real test is overcoming myself
to apply my mind and body to make wealth
and tell my quiet self that its time to get loud
and its gotta get done right now because
nobody lives forever
or how long a life will go
will you be remembered
wanna make the most of my window
did you surrender to the divine flow
will you be remembered
wanna make the most of my window
@misterdemp Feb 2022
love that most of my window....great take on this particular usage of the word. Great spoken/singing combo.
@vegansongs Feb 2022
Sparkling shine! I really like this rap with electric piano!
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Healthy thoughts coming forth out of that chill piano track. Fine skirmishing.
@crutherford Feb 2022
i love your take on the window being your life. it's great! dig how you get louder when you say you are in the tune.
great job on the skirmish!
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Very interesting and creative take on the prompt. Grabs the listener and holds attention perfectly.
@chipwithrow Feb 2022
This is awesome - such a sweet laid-back groove, and an amazing delivery of the words. Powerful message. Wow!
@sheslin Feb 2022
Oh I like this one too! Love the vocalization. Cool vibe and I love the contrast of your verses and the chorus. Wonderful take on the prompt.
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Oh this is one of my favs from you. That hook line is very powerful and definitely will be one I remember.
@halfwayhome Feb 2022
Man, short but sweet! Such a cool vibe - that backing is SMOOOOTH. I love the message in the lyric, but more how you're going about delivering it, it could be dark, but it's so uplifting.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
Seriously Keith, thanks for illuminating me that Rap doesn't have to have an overwhelming bass and a drum machine to get over its message. It was a genre I always turned off when I heard it before, but I have enjoyed every one of your skirmishes I have managed to listen to and this is no exception.
@sunfire Feb 2022
Excellent! and very creative. I like the vocal delivery variation between the verses and chorus.