Prompt was revival I think I kind of started thinking about reviving the world . It is what it is!!
Revival
Everybody want to hear about
Revive
Revive
Revival
And everybody Say they think about
Survive
Survive
Survival.
But
you’re living your lives
With too much money
It’s just paper - from trees!
And your living your lives
And it’s really not funny
You ( and your kind’s) the disease!
Everybody’s talking bout
Who and what abd how mits all it’s noise
Everybody chattering gabbering abd nattering
No one here has - poise
Cause they’re living their lives
With too much bullshit
It’s just a consequence - this!
Yeah living ‘our’ lives
Thinking we’re cultured
Now raise your necks - we can hiss!
Boo! You flimsy parasite
Get off the world or hold tight
Boo! You think you’re shinin a light
But you are the problem - that’s right!
Revision
Revival
Revitalise
Talking heads talking..
Return
Rebel
Restructure
Talking heads of what ?
Vitality democracy mediocracy alacrity
Polemics and pedantry fantasy polarity
Wickedness snd chicken mess and doing less and take a guess
Politics snd oratory snd song lyrics and hollow trees
Magic and mischief and hope and happiness
Feeling and foolishness and grow up snd confess
Well-being and weirdness snd grime snd grudges
Healing and hell rants tearaway and trudges
Everyone’s talking bout
Exist
Exist
Existence
Everyone is talking bout
Resist
Resist
resistance
everybody
Everybody
Ever think that’s me?
Everybody
Everybody
How do you want to be free?
Free from wealth and free from greed
Free from letting the people bleed
Free from excess snd free from inequality
Free from shame and moral vacuity
No one here with a voice
That’s a bit
Try
Try
Tribal
No one here that has a choice
To be
I
I
Idle
@scubed Feb 2022
Wow! Really well thought -out and well-crafted lyrics with a powerful message. Great skirmishing!
@cicpisces Feb 2022
Nice deep lyrics. It's a nice take on the prompt. It's a vast topic to cover , reviving the world but you do it well.
@cindyrella Feb 2022
How on earth did you do this so quickly? I'm in awe with the structure and deepness of it. Great skirmish!
@lennie Feb 2022
Your words have an amazing rhythm all to themselves, it jumps off the screen at you. I can only imagine the energy levels it would take to express them singing with the deserving conviction - a few tongue twisters in there too!
@johnstaples Feb 2022
Wow, what a detailed, well structured and spot on set of lyrics!!! I love how you built up to certain words like "Try, Try, Tribal" and "Revive, Revive, Revival" That is a really cool structural technique/hook! And your message about we parasites? Well, that is some damn fine observation and critique! Really great skirmishing!
@tjeff Feb 2022
We do need reviving in many ways! Great take on the prompt. I like the use of "revive" with "survive" a lot. Also "tribal" and "idle." Good flow to the entire lyric.