Tried two recordings and one set of lyrics. Recordings issues I haven’t resolved with DAWS etc maybe finally get it sorted before March 1. But here goes a lyric in miniature.
You are beyond compare
Yes you
Over there
With the hair
Can I share that
You
Are
Beyond
Compare?
So far past the benchmark for comparison
Are you
( yes you!)
That someone needs to tell you
Otherwise, well you’d
Make a mockery of our
Modes to measure .
Treasure our petty advancement
Don’t we ?
While you
Well you know
You are
Out
There.
Somewhere !
@odilongreen Feb 2022
Cool lyrics, and I have no idea what direction you intend to go with the music; I look forward to listening if you're able to get something up by the close of song submissions!
@nancycunning Feb 2022
Move over, Willy Shakespeare, @tunecat is in the house. Yes, you over there with the hair is so wildly specific and general at the same time. And then the climb up to Make a mockery of our modes to measure and the descent back to You are out there somewhere. Great arc. May your words find the music they were made for.
@andygetch Feb 2022
The lines
'Make a mockery of our
Modes to measure'
are something else. Lots to think about with this one and all sorts of music potential. Thanks for playing!
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Aww it's kinda sweet and edgy at the same time. Edgy mostly because of the assumed rhythm of the lyric as denoted by the spacing of the words on different lines.