Feb 2022 ccwelcome
This is the 6th of 8 tracks I hope to get to nit picking ready before FAWM end.
It started life during 50/90 2015 and it got a ton of poking and production prodding today to spruce it up.
So I'm looking for any nits/crits/idea/opinions/thoughts to make it 100% and put it to rest as #63 in my WK100 project (see my profile notes).
Still 2 of these to go and some more FAWM obligations to meet before end of FAWM so all repay visits including #tit4tats will begin happily on March 1.
Bear with me, I'm working like a madman here....
Thanks to all for the love, support, encouragement and input this FabFeb! I've reached places I never thought I could.
Enjoy.
Thanks. Latest mix update March7 is on my bandcamp here: https://wolfkier.bandcamp.com/track/she-brings-me-wk063 Any more nits? Please thanks!!!
She Brings Me by Wolf Kier
Copyright 2015 2022 Wolf Kier wk063
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It's written on my face and I don't care who knows it
Love made me a lucky man, my smiling face shows it
I opened up my heart and I don't wanna close it
I'm banging like a super man, I thank my lucky stars
She brings me joy she brings me
She brings me love she brings me
To my knees to my knees
She brings me love she brings me
She brings me hope she brings me
All I need, all I need
Of all the fishies in the sea God helped me to choose her
I know she's the girl for me, I'll never abuse her
And when she wants a wedding ring, I'll never refuse her
I cross my heart and say a prayer cos I don't wanna lose her
She brings me joy she brings me
She brings me love she brings me
To my knees to my knees
She brings me love she brings me
She brings me hope she brings me
All I need, all I need
Oh the angels must have made her
I'd give my life to save her
You know I wouldn't trade her
She's a such a lovely flavor
All I need, all I need
She brings me joy she brings me
She brings me love she brings me
To my knees to my knees
I got her name and I got her number
Will she call me back? I gotta wonder
I see the lightning I hear the thunder
What God puts together, let no man put asunder.
She brings me joy she brings me
She brings me love she brings me
To my knees to my knees
She brings me love she brings me
She brings me hope she brings me
All I need, all I need
She brings me joy she brings me
She brings me love she brings me
To my knees to my knees
@sbs2018 Mar 2022
The lyrics are inspired and, yeah, work well with that “galloping” rhythm. Instrumentation is harmonious - nothing sticks out too much.
@wolfkier Mar 2022
Thanks all, Latest mix update is on my bandcamp here: https://wolfkier.bandcamp.com/track/she-brings-me-wk063
The complaints department is open and happy to listen. Anything else you can think of to lift this even marginally higher is very welcome! :)
@n24 Mar 2022
I love the pace on this track, really nice to hear something galloping along like this beat. Lovely stylised vocals, got a very Bowie feel :) great lyrics, I love ‘ Of all the fishies in the sea. God helped me to choose her.’ There’s a really nice mix going on in the back, some nice understated additions filling up the sound and that lovely clean guitar carrying some melody. Great work!
@ambroise Mar 2022
Killer lines : "She brings me love she brings me / To my knees".
Nice love song. But not naive nor dumbstruck.
I've no cc in my bag for you. This production sounds pretty tweacked to me (found this verb in the dictionnary, hope it means what I mean).
We can feel a roaring joy, here.
#tit4tat
@williamjames Mar 2022
I feel like this type of chorus is kind of signature style for you, it really works well, you layer the voices so well. It sounds great through my headphones, nothing to nitpick about. Your production is spot on! I love the fast paced verses. Again a very cool song!
@rshakesp Mar 2022
This groves along nicely - I really like the to and fro of the refrain response lyrics. The xylophone part is really cool (that could come out of the mix a bit more. Perhaps not panned so hard left) as if by magic you do that later in the song
- ha.
The bass part is really nice too - you could up the level a little and get away with it - great song
@guitarpatz83 Mar 2022
I love the muttered delivery with the two vocals in the choruses. There’s a real feel of stream of consciousness here which really works for that groove that all centres around the baseline/ drum pattern with the bass staying on one note a lot. That flanged synth is sick love it and the way you interplay with the guitar part. Just on my second listen as I like to go over twice, and the variations really keep things interesting with the various keys/synths you play around with. My only suggestion would be right at the very end, I think it might be really nice to have everything fade out except for that keys part (is it a xylophone? Can’t quite tell!) and just let that part play through all on its own once or twice to finish. I just love little touches like that. Awesome work man!
@ampersandman Mar 2022
Nothing to nitpick here, just a fun, upbeat track with a catchy chorus. Liked my two listens a lot.
@seppo Feb 2022
Oh hell yes, this is so freakin' great.
Very upbeat and bit silly and maybe just cause of that it's awesome.
@lenigmusx1 Feb 2022
This is a banger! Great song. “The angels must have made her” yup. That haunting synth is killer.
@ferry0123 Feb 2022
There's some sort of Rolling Stones vibe to this. Very likable. And very catchy indeed. Typical Wolf-style, another groover with sparkling creativity!
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This is really wonderful!! Love the grove and the admiration of and attraction to someone very special. So much joy and excitement! Catchy as heck chorus! Awesome vocals!
@nahlej381 Feb 2022
#tit4tat
Zong busted!!!
This one’s a lot of fun! Love the production and lyrics as always. When are you gonna post something bad!? Geez!!!
Getting some replacements vibes from this for some reason