This is a one hour write, record, post challenge song for FAWM (February Album Writing Month). The theme to write to was posted 40 minutes ago, "Silly Love Song"
Blue eyed girl with a shining smile
You've been my world for quite a while
Bring me up when I'm down
Glad to have you around me
Most of the time I mean that
Most of the time you feel it too
But we can get annoying
A little space and we remember
I adore holding your hand
Late night walks can be grand when I'm with you
A star filled sky up above lets me know I'm in love, it's true
That most of the time I mean that
Most of the time you feel it too
But we can get annoying
A little space and we remember
The two of us together
Can conquer whatever
The world throws our way
Side by side it's us forever
Rainy days could never sever
Our bonds 'cause it's us all the way
Most of the time I mean that
Most of the time you feel it too
But we can get annoying
A little space and we remember
It's us, always us
You and I, we got this
Huh?
@misterdemp Feb 2022
love the earnest tone and set up...cool flip with "we can get annoying" into wry and silly.
@unknownbecky Feb 2022
Such a catchy, singable melody! Great skirmish!
@feb21sundari Feb 2022
Wow, that's really nice. The refrain "...But we can get annoying
A little space and we remember" is a great musically packaged relationship tip . I also love the intermediate part with "The two of us...Rainy days..." has an awesome melody and is very catchy..
@prsongsmith Feb 2022
This is lovely -- and the honesty of the "...most of the time..." refrain makes the rest of the song even sweeter. I think anyone in a relationship can attest to the truth of what you're saying. Well done! Impressive skirmish!
@tjeff Feb 2022
I like the upbeat nature of the music - fits the lyric so well. The "I adore holding your hand..." section really stands out. Good skirmish!
@andygriff Feb 2022
This is a sweet little number. Love how uncynical it is. Breezy and hopeful :)
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
This is lighthearted and playful for sure. The energetic tempo and earnest vocal fit perfectly. A feel-good song.
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Aww so romantic and sweet, and definitely a very loving silly love song. Love the elements of reality in it.
@jeustan Feb 2022
Finally, a realistic love song that doesn't lose the depth of feeling for being real. "We can get annoying" slices right through the cheese and brings it home and makes it relatable. Great idea! Nice singing!
@kristi Feb 2022
What a lovely, gentle love song! I enjoyed the playing and the vocal comes across as heartfelt. More than a "silly" love song really! Good skirmish!
@berni1954 Feb 2022
Yes, this is definitely within the strictures of Sir Paul's "Silly Love Songs" of which we can , apparently, never have enough of.
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
Aww, so many sweet, sinsere lines in this write. Always good to have a little space sometimes. Beautiful performance. Love the vocals on this. Amazing skirmish!!!