Top notch production. Cannot believe that this is only a draft, it sounds half finished. I agree to @jibbidy34 that something is missing in the tutti part of the arrangement. An organ could work, but I also think about a blues harp. I hear this song with a vocalist. Sort of "I've been through this" alt rock or country voice. Preferably baritone or contraalto. I'm sorry that I don't have such a voice and don't feel like a singer, otherwise I'd jump in.
Lovely, solid rock feel, and with the twist that your chord voicings give this a great melancholy vibe. Would work with a range of vocal styles. I agree with @jibbidy34. A touch of B3 would kick this into orbit. :-)
This is an epic soundscape. Love all the things that are going on underpinned by some good ol’ clean guitar. I could hear some Hammond organ coming in 3/4 of the way if you have that. Would be the icing on this cake!
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@pipewrench67 Mar 2022
Solid piece here, would be very easy to lay a vocal on top of this. The form is well laid out and there is plenty of space to move around in.
@nadine Feb 2022
Top notch production. Cannot believe that this is only a draft, it sounds half finished. I agree to @jibbidy34 that something is missing in the tutti part of the arrangement. An organ could work, but I also think about a blues harp. I hear this song with a vocalist. Sort of "I've been through this" alt rock or country voice. Preferably baritone or contraalto. I'm sorry that I don't have such a voice and don't feel like a singer, otherwise I'd jump in.
@dragondreams Feb 2022
Lovely, solid rock feel, and with the twist that your chord voicings give this a great melancholy vibe. Would work with a range of vocal styles. I agree with @jibbidy34. A touch of B3 would kick this into orbit. :-)
@jibbidy34 Feb 2022
This is an epic soundscape. Love all the things that are going on underpinned by some good ol’ clean guitar. I could hear some Hammond organ coming in 3/4 of the way if you have that. Would be the icing on this cake!