If I had the skills or the means I’d want to flesh this out into a Carly Rae Jensen style BOP but sadly I am not able to do that so just imagine it that way okay? Haha
I routinely write guitar parts I can't really play - so I fake it and pretend that's what I meant. ;) You did do your best, and remember we never apologize about our FAWM demos :D
I can hear this as a CRJ style song for sure. Good melodic sense to this song.
I've genuinely enjoyed all 4 of your FAWM songs. Keep writing! You've got skills!
Again, your voice and the way you sing are so great. I love the repetitveness of the chorus, that hypnotizing "take it" "take it" "took that" "took that" It's another great song.
Oh, and hard strumming patterns, yeah. I've gotten to where I can learn a strumming pattern on it's own, but trying to play it while my voice does something else still feels mostly impossible. Good job going ahead and playing the song the way you can now.
I was totally feeling that "not that good of a guitar player" - my lack of ability frustrates me too. But I'm really glad you wrote and shared the simplified song! Sweet song!
OMG this is delicious grrrl. Your rhymes, your voice and the little giggles all make this a very special and so endearing song. I hope this gets more plays and listens coz it deserves it!
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@metalfoot Mar 2022
I routinely write guitar parts I can't really play - so I fake it and pretend that's what I meant. ;) You did do your best, and remember we never apologize about our FAWM demos :D
I can hear this as a CRJ style song for sure. Good melodic sense to this song.
I've genuinely enjoyed all 4 of your FAWM songs. Keep writing! You've got skills!
@nancycunning Mar 2022
Again, your voice and the way you sing are so great. I love the repetitveness of the chorus, that hypnotizing "take it" "take it" "took that" "took that" It's another great song.
Oh, and hard strumming patterns, yeah. I've gotten to where I can learn a strumming pattern on it's own, but trying to play it while my voice does something else still feels mostly impossible. Good job going ahead and playing the song the way you can now.
@miga Mar 2022
I was totally feeling that "not that good of a guitar player" - my lack of ability frustrates me too. But I'm really glad you wrote and shared the simplified song! Sweet song!
@jibbidy34 Feb 2022
OMG this is delicious grrrl. Your rhymes, your voice and the little giggles all make this a very special and so endearing song. I hope this gets more plays and listens coz it deserves it!