Feb 2022 needs-music needs-collab lyrics lyrics-only superskirmish wave ss022522f
Skirmish SS022522f
Theme: Wave
This was a fun write, as once upon a very long time ago, I did a little surfing...
Collab welcome - I'm thinking surf rock :)
v1
If you jump in cold water
In the ocean blue
You don't need to be cautious
With your surfin' crew
Chorus
Everybody is doing it
Surfin in the groove
If you d'wanna then screw you
You can make the brew
v2
I got a denim blue jacket
Full of rips an tears
Now the girls drool senseless
When I flick my hair
Chorus
Everybody is doing it
Surfin in the groove
If you d'wanna then screw you
You can make the brew
If you d'wanna then screw you
You can make the brew
Bridge
There's gonna be some dancing
An' some gentle romance
We're planning us a barbie
If we get a chance
There'll be loads of us surfing
On the ocean swell
All day long we'll be surfin
Cus that's what we do well
Outro refrain
If you d'wanna then screw you
You can make the brew
If you d'wanna then screw you
You can make the brew
@splittybooms Feb 2022
100% can hear the surf rock in these lyrics. Doo-wop harmonies doing ooohs and aaahs under the verses.
Completely upbeat and bright lyrics.
Never went surfing (not a good swimmer and totally uncoordinated) but I would gladly man the barbie!
Can hear this and see this entire song. Such a feel good beach vibe! I can even smell the hot dogs and burgers.
@scubed Feb 2022
Fun, creative take on the skirmish prompt! “Now the girls drool senseless When I flick my hair” - what an awesome line! I can just see him….
@musicsongwriter Feb 2022
Very interesting take on the prompt, unexpected and strong, as always.
@porrectus Feb 2022
Thats fun, nice take. You can hear the surf music with it. Nice work.
@berni1954 Feb 2022
I'm hearing a Beach Boys surfing classic on this one!
@wylddandelyon Feb 2022
I've never tried surfing but it's gotta be better than the brew (here in Milwaukee, brew means beer, and beer has hops flavor, which doesn't taste good on my tongue even in tea).
I especially like this chorus:
There's gonna be some dancing
An' some gentle romance
We're planning us a barbie
If we get a chance
There'll be loads of us surfing
On the ocean swell
All day long we'll be surfin
Cus that's what we do well
@andygriff Feb 2022
Nice in yer face take on the prompt! I like. Sort of Beach Boys vibe musically perhaps?
@sunfire Feb 2022
Edgy and attitudy! lol I like it. Very good.
@mhorning Feb 2022
I like it. Nice break on the bridge. And my favorite beer (someone else's beer)
@hmstreetteam Feb 2022
This is that narrow-minded focus that I am told surfing requires. It’s a nice way to illustrate the state of mind by moving it a short distance within the same scene. It sounds like fun!
@keithcuts Feb 2022
You are dialed in to the angry side this fawm lol!
Heavy emotion conveyed well!
Clever rhymes in there.
Nicely done!