Feb 2022 exquisite-corpse rock portuguese
welcome to the GALLIPOLI Exquisite Corpse, presented by:
1 @erbaer
2 @jamkar
3 @ampersandman
4 @downburst
5 @cairobraga (stitcher)
the thread is here: https://fawm.org/forums/topic/12399/
@jamkar:
My eyes are open I can’t help but see
10,000 miles or more from the sky to the sea
now I appeal to the circling cameras
please explain to me
what made us think that any of us has privacy.
@ampersandman:
Just when you throw away your smartphone
just when you sink it in the sea
Just when you log out forever
Move into a cabin in the woods
Leave the modern world for good
That's when you can enjoy your privacy
@downburst:
Even though most everyone
Has problems of their own
People in the neighborhood
Won’t leave you alone
All those others watching you
Just outside your door
Waiting there for your excuses
Like they did before
Sing a song of ugliness
They don’t like your kind
Go where they can’t follow you
Deep inside your mind
[ghostly]
Friend, there is a glitch in you
Though you’re not aware
You’re such a damaged thing
Broken past repair
@cairobraga:
aquilo que te assombra pelas noites
ainda pode ser percebido ao sol
tudo que levas dentro nunca te abandona
não te enganes
não existe o lugar
nenhures
que te faça alcançar
a fuga dos teus algozes
entre o pólo e a escuridão
algures
há de tudo e há o som
da paz, da Terra e da solidão
da solidão
(nenhures)
da solidão
(nenhures)...
@metalfoot Feb 2022
I love the shifts from person to person within this, each with their own individual style and flair yet coming together as a continuous whole. Distrust of the modern world for the WIN.
@richaaaay Feb 2022
This is fun. The transition between each section was interesting. Going from ampersandman and downburst was seemless. I actually had to refer to the lyrics to see if the change had happened. Each transition had it's own feel but the flow throughout was great. Must have been fun to create!
@ampersandman Feb 2022
Quite a ride ... great job everyone! The harmony on my last line took me by surprise, nice, that borders on the realm of collabs. The transitions are just perfect, @cairobraga! Your portuguese song could stand as a song of its own.
@jamkar Feb 2022
It lives! It breathes! Sweeping the world. Nice stitching Cairo!