I like this at its core, but I need MORE WORDS. I like the mono-chord chorus and the verse that's never actually the same. I feel like I might have a bit too much of a Costello energy, but I'm gonna roll with it.
Sorry the lyrics have the chords, I'm running out of time and just wanna quick copy/paste. I'll get rid of 'em later.
I’m weak, you’re sleek, you
Look like a good way to start another bender
In our trance. We sure can dance.
Move my hips, get my heart stuck in your blender.
Calm and cool, aloof but not cruel
Try to pretend like this doesn’t really matter, but
In my head, so much has been said
I’m so high if I fall I’ll surely splatter, but I
I want, I want, I want, I want, I wanna see you again
I want, I want, I want, I want, I wanna see you again, but
@tomslatter Mar 2022
This is a strong song, you've got a good hook in there and the chord changes really work.
@sadloaf Feb 2022
FAWM is into full-on one-take mode at this point lol. Good luck to getting to 14! I can't see the finish line yet myself.
I dig the sort of Ben Kweller vibe of this song! Though I can't hear the words "heart" and "blender" that close to each other without thinking about Eve6.