I've used the phrase "golden light" before and I really like that concept, I wanted to make a more empowered sad girl song, about walking away.
Golden light all around you shine shine shine
Boy you always kept me up at night night night
And the pain was so unlimited
And only when I let it in
No I can't be bothered
I don’t play to lose
Bet It drives you crazy
Bet It drives you crazy
That I can't be bothered
I don’t play to lose
Bet it drives you crazy
Bet it drives you crazy
I will always hold you in my heart
Even though you tore my life apart
I have to walk away before it's too late
I have to walk away before the ending credits play
Now I can't be bothered
I don’t play to lose
Bet It drives you crazy
Bet It drives you crazy
That I can't be bothered
I don’t play to lose
Bet it drives you crazy
Bet it drives you crazy
@sheslin Feb 2022
Your song reminds me of Creep sonically. Lovely emotive stuff with your fabulous haunting melodies and golden vocals. Nice use of repetition in your lyrics.
@dabirks Feb 2022
This is exactly the type of song that I love and cannot write - I'm jealous and it drive me crazy... Wow. Some powerful melodic choices. The chorus is so nice. I absolutely love "I have to walk away before the ending credits play"
@nancycunning Feb 2022
Wow, this is such a beautiful song, feels like it redeems the pain.
I love how that double chorus works. I love how you sing it, so much feeling in claiming you can't be bothered.
Great singing, Pinky. Great tone, Clementine.
@princesssavania Feb 2022
I love how the melodies, lyrics and concept all work together to create a haunting nature for the song. “Unlimited” rhymed with “let it in” — damn that’s good! Such a great write, Pinky
@reliabletoaster Feb 2022
The form and story of the song were really great. good job.