Feb 2022 needs-collab needs-music needs-vocals
[INTRO] Are you my Vulture?
Are you myyyyy Vulture?
Are you my Vulture?
Are you my vullllture?
[CHORUS]Don’t wanna be saying Fuck Love again;
I wanna be stealing hidden kisses; from the window; in the crowd; with you instead;
my eternal love; it’ll be lit forever with sudden rushes of sexual rage;
an eternal love flame flame flame that’ll glide easily dancing with the wind;
I’ll keep you from going going insane insane insane;
in your lovely brain lovely brain lovely brain;
Love is defiantly in the brain the brain the brain;
You’re the only one that’ll do to keep carrying my name;
[VERSE1]Fuck Love
Forget about the deepest intimacy I have ever felt;
Fuck Love
Forget about our happiness; the times discovering together;
Fuck Love
Fuck Love
Forget about the you and the me.
You’re probably thinking on your next conquest; thining of your new Star crossed Lover?
Fuck Love
[CHORUS]Don’t wanna be saying Fuck Love again;
I wanna be stealing hidden kisses; from the window; in the crowd; with you instead;
my eternal love; it’ll be lit forever with sudden rushes of sexual rage;
an eternal love flame flame flame that’ll glide easily dancing with the wind;
I’ll keep you from going going insane insane insane;
in your lovely brain lovely brain lovely brain;
Love is defiantly in the brain the brain the brain;
You’re the only one that’ll do to keep carrying my name;
[BRIDGE]Vultures are needed to clean up the mess
Like them you helped me clean up the nasty in my life
Are you my vulture?
Your love gets my other's bullshit reaped
reaping their bullshit from my head
reaping their bullshit from my everything
I feel clean loved and sane again
Fuck Love?
Though I need it now I see; how can we not be meant to be.
I’m not created to be alone; am I ever really?
Least outwardly;
Now that I thought it through;
exhaustively; comprehensively;
why would i walk away;
saying FUCK LOVE?
[CHORUS]Don’t wanna be saying Fuck Love again;
I wanna be stealing hidden kisses; from the window; in the crowd; with you instead;
my eternal love; it’ll be lit forever with sudden rushes of sexual rage;
an eternal love flame flame flame that’ll glide easily dancing with the wind;
I’ll keep you from going going insane insane insane;
in your lovely brain lovely brain lovely brain;
Love is defiantly in the brain the brain the brain;
You’re the only one that’ll do to carry my name;
I won’t be saying Fuck Love again; going against what I know to be true;
For I would actually be like saying;
“Fuck you.” “Fuck you.”“Fuck you.”
Bringing us forward to our destiny;
Bringing us forward to our destiny;
We’ll be inspiring each other to see rosier days
living harmoniously happy; thriving off each other
For me I now know there is no other.
ravish me
ravish me
[OUTRO] ravish me in your everlasting delight; holding me with all your might; with random kisses and the like
©2022 by Apolez Taurus aka Arlene Kaczka
@robynmackenzie Feb 2022
Great chorus, love those repetitions. This reads like the kind of tormented stream of consciousness that comes after a breakup, which I think is what you were going for. You nailed it!
@paulroe Feb 2022
This has some intense, feral beautiful phrasings. Like King Lear and Othello would pause a moment from their own tirades to pay homage. The eponymous character, the Vulture, only makes brief appearances in the actual poem but his symbolic power is clear, his purpose well delineated: this ragged, often viewed as ugly, but essential-to-our-ecosystems scavenger, is the sought after in the brief moment the speaker surfaces from the strong undercurrent of rushing thoughts to call out for her vulture. Good stuff
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
I really like this lyric! I feel like it could be stripped down and pretty with an emphasis on the curse words for drama, or it could be punk! So many directions. Love the passion in this writing. Looking forward to hearing the music!