This needs collab. It needs ear candy, samples, Jamaican DJs, the works and for a change I'm blanking. Anyone got any ideas?
I hear the light is brighter out in Babylon
It’s hotter than the sun in Biscayne Bay
Lately the whites are rioting in Zion
Water’s more than it’s weight in gold today
You may believe that you might be forgiven
And maybe you’ll get away with what you’ve done
But if you recall the fall
Honey it's all in fun she said
The finger's not to blame
It’s just the gun
The demons of El Cajon have all come calling
Crawling along and singing Jesus Saves
It’s true that they do these brutal acts of cruelty to you
While swearing it’s for the good of all their slaves
You may believe that you might be forgiven
And maybe you’ll get away with what you’ve done
But if you recall the fall
Honey it's all in fun she said
The finger's not to blame
It’s just the gun
They say the air is warm in California
Normally it’s quite cruel this time of year
Clearly the end is near
But as long as we’re all still here
Beers, Steers and Queers just sign right here
You may believe that you might be forgiven
And maybe you’ll get away with what you’ve done
But if you recall the fall
Honey it's all in fun she said
The finger's not to blame
It’s just the gun
@robynmackenzie Mar 2022
Great reggae groove! Really strong vocals, I like the delay and the processing. The lyrics are unique and intriguing, especially the chorus. That solo is amazing!
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
This is very interesting, I like it a lot.
I do see what you mean by ear candy would be great on this... maybe some caribb drum sounds with unusual rhythms that fit. As long as they don't distract from that cool solo in the middle !