Took the chord loop as far as I could with different melodies.
More of an exercise than a song.
Do you ever feel your somebody else
Do you find yourself forgetting yourself
Do you have a chance of starting again
Or are you the same as you’ve always been
Pinch yourself until you can’t feel a thing
Knocking on the door that won’t let you in
Feel the chemicals are under your skin
Gotta hit the ground to jump up again
And I am coming down
Are you coming around
I find with no one around
That I am coming down
The dream goes on
I need clothes on
It seems so long
To find my way back where I started from
Do you ever feel you’re somebody else
Do you find yourself repeating yourself
@bithprod Feb 2022
Well done on the chord loop challenge. Very fitting lyrics, obviously. :) Very good vocals and guitar playing. I think you nailed the challenge.
@sheslin Feb 2022
I really like this, both lyrically and musically. The melody over that chord pattern is catchy and engaging. I like the questioning aspect of your lyrics really invites the listener onto the song. It almost has a meditative feel to it with the repetitive chord progression and that steady pattern throughout the song. Cool song!