I went off of the older lyric sheet and sung "together" and "talk" twice, that was fixed....sigh, that's what going fast does. Sort of short and love songs are not my forte....onto the next song.
Hand in Hand
by Tammy Jann
© 2022
She put on a mask to hide her fears
eyes swollen from shedding her tears
faked courage she hadn't had for years
Nervous to start meeting new friends
lightening struck and magic began
sharing stories, she's laughing again
On a cold, dark day to her surprise
he reached for her hand for the first time
the mask was gone a smile reached her eyes
chorus
Love starts
when you listen and understand
love lasts
when you walk hand in hand
Comfortable when they talk all day
so happy and with so much to say
each moment's special in every way
together from the sun to the moon
the start to share like lovers do
their thoughts are now so in tune
just one gesture sets off a spark
ignites a flame in your heart
falling in love is the best part
@andygetch Mar 2022
Such a pleasant happy love song. BTW I struggle with writing them at all so kudos for bringing this one to life.
@tjeff Mar 2022
I'm enjoying the chord progression a lot, and also the fun groove. I like it when the guitar slows down for a moment on "love starts" and those harmonies come in. Lovely harmonies! A happy song - I enjoyed it!
@sailingmagpie Mar 2022
Those harmonies are so delightful on that catchy chorus. There's some really unexpected chords that pop up in this to keep the listener on their toes!
@metalfoot Mar 2022
This is pretty and happy feeling -- the harmonies on the chorus are just stellar.
@jacobeverettwallace Mar 2022
Such a lovely composition! Excellent lyric, delivery and arrangement! Very much enjoyed this!
@jyllian Feb 2022
I like this a lot! The chord choices are bright but still unique. Fun!
@grayland Feb 2022
What I love about this song is the chord choice and melody... The chorus harmony is angelic!!!! Great work!!
@ttg105 Feb 2022
Very nice short tune (and uncharacteristically optimistic!). That chorus is really catchy, and I can picture a whistling verse to add to the cheerfulness. The way the two voices come together on "love starts" is lovely!
@chipwithrow Feb 2022
Wonderful song! Your voices and strum exude positivity and optimism and the giddiness of falling in love. They might not be your forte, but you can indeed write an awesome love song!
@mikeb Feb 2022
Oh those chorus harmonies!
@mjv Feb 2022
such a sweet song love the harmonies
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Ooooo …. The way you hang your vocal harmonies on lines 1 and 3 gives me warm fuzzy chills. Love the message in this as the love feels so tender and compassionate. Lovely!
@wylddandelyon Feb 2022
Oh, that chorus, so soft with the harmonies. And the story is so sweet. Nice!
@driftwood1 Feb 2022
I love how the verse starts with the bright major sound and as the chord walks down it just gets darker and darker and then bounces right back. It's really effective.
@tseaver Feb 2022
Lovely write! Good story telling, a great vocal performance (and yummy chorus BGVs), and a fun bounce to the guitar. Given that the genre is outside your wheelhouse / comfort zone, you've hit this one out of the park.
@cindyrella Feb 2022
This is amazing and so sweet! I love the harmonies especially the chorus! I big hit for me!!