Feb 2022 girl-with-guitar indie-pop folk-pop
my attempt at polysemy went... ok. I could only work one in - "moon/moon" - but I think the song couldn't hold two, at least not yet. Maybe with a bridge... hmm... "bridge" (noun) that carries you over water and "bridge" (verb) a gap... maybe...?
I’m the kind of girl who likes to gaze up at the moon
You’re the kind of guy who thinks it’s fun to moon a stranger
I think the end is coming soon
But I think it’s safe to say my hearts in danger
How many times will we give this a chance?
You don’t read books or understand romance.
How many times will we says that its over?
Can a break-up happen any slower?
I can’t pretend it wasn’t fun for a while,
Working together at our favorite bar.
I found a new job and you lost your easy smile.
You sleep alone while I play on my guitar.
@sailingmagpie Mar 2022
Great vocals on this track. "You don’t read books or understand romance" is such a good line. The chorus is a real earworm!
@ambroise Feb 2022
So sweet and so sad at the same time... Can one cuddle away from a beak up ? This song let us hope.
@max Feb 2022
I'm all over the moon, listening to this one!
The complexity of a slow break-up very well crafted in a song. Great work, wonderful performance.
@sherrylynnlee Feb 2022
Beautiful song and your voice is just gorgeous!
You could probably sneak another one with "over":
We've done this over and over, saying it's over
Great job!
@skyezor Feb 2022
Oh, Jess this one is realllly
good. The melody movement on MOON, SOON, Over, etc is just so achingly haunting and I am HERE for it. Wow. So much emotion. This is so good.
@leakyplusme2 Feb 2022
This is lovely you have a beautiful voice Jessica keep up the good work.