Feb 2022
Empty hands
I have empty hands left
Of what I’d thought I’d give you
Because all that I could
I would and already did
give
I was willing to cross the ocean with you
But now it’s hard sitting across you at a continent of tables and divide’s
You are killing me
But slowly
I’m drowning
Swallowing
water with the words you feed me daily
Bread I choke on it
And yes it makes me fat because
I’m innocent
I’ve always been
A child
To you
And this brings the big divide
That I will never grow up
And you’ll always be grown up
And our love is
…a sandpit with a sandcastles, buckets and a red spade
And our love Is an anesthesia trolley
With oxygen and defibrillators
But even that can’t save us
Red and blue
Dont go together
Like me and you
Lifeless
Lie
Little
Lost
Loser
Our penny love used to be gold
@aneil Feb 2022
Hard hitting very sad and moving.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This lyric reaches deep into my heart and soul. The feeling and the situation feels so sad. You convey a relationship where there is longing and love amid a situation where people have drifted apart with different dreams and desires. Very heartfelt and honest feeling and sad.
@bithprod Feb 2022
That poem hit me in the gut. Very relatable. Will you be making a melody for it?