quietly you shine
©jean mann 2022 blue flower friday records
hide behind a dance
quietly you shine
uttering a sound
unfamiliar realm
traveling by rote
ragged as the road
wind flutters in blue
swirling round the edge
sitting by your bed
you in favorite hat
love pours out in tears
as I drive away
twilight soaked in pink
never twice the same
next year we’ll be further
each along our way
I hide behind a dance
and quietly you shine
wind sparkles in gold
swells into the night
@bluejean Feb 2022
@jessicamoon thank you for your words and listening!
@bluejean Feb 2022
@skyezor Thanks so much.
@bluejean Feb 2022
@pabrizzer thank you!
@jessicamoon Feb 2022
I agree about the ukulele being awesome and also love your voice, you have a great storytelling voice, I love how it trails off in certain moments and sounds so wistful.
@skyezor Feb 2022
Your picking and chord choice are exquisite, ethereal even. I love the vibe and lyrical composition of this song. “Wind flutters in blue swirling round the edge”- this song is a painting and I’m here for it!
@pabrizzer Feb 2022
has an oriental vibe - melancholy - like it