I am digging this song a lot, I will likely approach it from a few different angles in the future, but here is it's first, simple, iteration.
Tick Tick Tick Tick goes the clock as i wait for you
Tick Tick Tick Tick goes the clock as i wait for you
Gone are the hours
Slipping sliding through my fingers
Tick Tick Tick Tick goes the clock as i wait for you
Tick Tick Tick Tick goes the clock as i wait for you
Gone are the hours
Slipping sliding through my fingers
Gone are the hours
Smoke and mirrors of existence
@nancycunning Feb 2022
Pinky - This is so compelling. Takes the feeling of staring at the clock and turns it into a cosmic experience.
@sheslin Feb 2022
Oh those chords are luscious! The light vocals are perfect. Oh such jazzy cool vocal harmonies and adds. You completed a challenge I would say - the 4-Chord loop challenge. This song to me is a lighter version of sad - more breezy and contemplative rather than on the ground devastated. I really like it!
@princesssavania Feb 2022
I love how you used such simple elements to create such a crisp and fresh atmosphere for your song. This song’s simplicity feels very refreshing. The ba ba ba’s sound like bubbles floating up, adding to the overall whimsy of this song. This is something special! Can’t wait to hear what you do with it
@jacobeverettwallace Feb 2022
You've got a great voice! This really mesmerized me. Creative and unexpected. Well done!
@rayboneor Feb 2022
I was loving the feeling you created with just the guitar (and what ever is sort of dinging up high), but that vocal blew my mind. You had me at "tick tick" but, dang, it's all so good. There's a lot of good music in the world, but sometimes a song comes around that I want to play on repeat...and this is one