Feb 2022
I read through Cheryl's lyrics, and just couldn't resist making up some stuff.
Blues guitarists looking to add an instrumental bridge here, please hit me up.
"Reunited"
Random Archetypes Oracle Challenge
Week 1 Body Part Challenge
Cards: The Creator; The Desert; The Seed; Eros
©2022 W&W
I started as a happy little seed
Swimming around
I still remember who I used to be
Lives lost and found
Creator painted a picture of me
Gave me my sound
Added my blue-gray eyes so I could see
Sent me earth-bound
Primal birthplace
I have emerged
Primal desire
Reunited
Primal longing
Arms re-embraced
Mother's calling
I learned lessons while grasping for meaning
Merging with nature
Visions I see seize creativity
Rife with flavor
While some haunt and terrify me deeply
Earth's world of hurt
Facing again my own mortality
I turn to dirt
Primal soul space
Spirit emerged
Primal desire
Slides into light
Primal longing
Arms re-embraced
Mother's calling
Reunited
Reunited
@kahlo2013 Mar 2022
Love these beautifully poetic lyrics and the slow swing jazzy piano! What a great marriage of music and lyrics! Wonderful emotion in the vocal delivery! Great melody!
@nadine Mar 2022
Am I'm listning right? @jamkar playing a honky tonk? I loved the acting of the vocals, but I think it would be a little bit easier some tones down, though some falsetto notes make it come alive. The lyrics @writeandwrong are very strong and I completely understand why @jamkar wanted to do the blues. Now I want some whiskey. Cheers #tit4tat
@andybalham Feb 2022
I can imagine this being played in a late night smoky club (remember those?). The piano is great and the lyrics work well.
@katestantonsings Feb 2022
These lyrics are fantastic @writeandwrong . I can see why they inspired you, @jamkar! Loving the piano. I agree it has the dixie ragtime vibes with some blues vocals in the mix. Great collab you two!! #Tit4Tat
@grayland Feb 2022
This is Great song!!! That piano is so unuque.. Its kinda like a slow ragtime and I love it! The way you interpreted Cheryl's awesome lyric is as one of a kind as the melody and really well done...with feeling....
@writeandwrong Feb 2022
Thanks for the collab, @jamkar! Fantastic piano work and getting the emotions through; sounds like something from a Mississippi blues club. Could easily hear a sax in the mix. Excellent work, Mike. Thanks, again :)
@karlsburg25 Feb 2022
Fantastic. Fantastic lyrics really sync into my way of thinking. And i adore those 7th chords you use in this. The way you project the song is perfect michael. Love it
@tamsnumber4 Feb 2022
Facing again my own mortality
I turn to dirt
I couldn't love this write more. What a wonderful telling of life, an amazing perspective, this is so well done, so rhythmic, glad it got music, I really like the piano in this and that Michael could connect with these lyrics. Great collab!