A little behind, but this is my try.
I'm Mad, You're Glad
© 2022 Cindy Prince
I wish I could be as easy going as you
I wish do everything like you do
I wish I never got anxious and blue
I wish I could just let things go
I wish I could have things under control
I wish I knew everything you seem to know
Chorus
I'm wild
You're mild
I'm mad
You're glad
I'm angry
And frankly
I just want to shout
I'm aghast
You're relaxed
I'm peeved
You're relieved
I'm frosty
And honestly
I'm totally worn out
I wish I could be happy- go- lucky
I wish I could be cheerful and plucky
I wish I wasn't a true fuddy-duddy
Repeat chorus
@taracraig Feb 2022
Great back-and-forth contrast. Very relatable. Nice take on the prompt.
@jwhanberry Feb 2022
Dichotomies in relationships can be perplexing...or refreshing. Good wordplay for a time limited write.
@tjeff Feb 2022
Love the back-and-forth contrast of your chorus lines. Creative take on the prompt!
@sheslin Feb 2022
Nice rhythm in your lyrics. I also really like the contrasting qualities in the chorus. This person sounds like the main character's perfect other half!
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
Really good rhythm to this, particularly the chorus. Very nice!
@andygriff Feb 2022
A good read and nice exploration of yin and yang. Nice work!
@tukayandryan Feb 2022
Really like the chorus here. Great rhythmic change. Enjoyed reading this. :)
@sheilerk Feb 2022
Well, opposites attract for a reason I guess. This is a great example of so many ways we can be opposite to our ideal of what we'd like to be. Nice write!
@ajna1960 Feb 2022
Love your chorus ! Great rhythm and the two different personalities vying one after the other is fun.
@tcelliott Feb 2022
I can hear two voices doing the chorus, one after the other. It sounds awesome in my head. I really like how you put that together.
@coolparadiso Feb 2022
Nice rhymes and really easy to read through another singers song. Cool chorus
@tunecat Feb 2022
Some nice word choices for the tomato tomato thing!! Fuddy Duddy is such a great expression!! ( and one my spell checker doesn’t like !)