FAWM exercise this is an improvisation so i didn't change anything i really have no idea who left who-written for FAWM forum 'polysemy' i chose the word 'close'
D, G, A, C guitar chords
I walk down to the shore
I look out the front door
I am walking along the beach
I feel the sand on my bare feet
and I'm hoping that I will find
a perfect shell to give to you
when I get back home
and I see you and
the water comes in high
and I'm close now
my heart was closed
but now it's opening
and I'm looking up at the blues sky
and I wonder why I left in the first place
and I didn't leave a trace
but I'm close now
opening my heart that I...
it was hard when you left me and I
tried to close down but
I look at the malibu hills I see
a trace of bright blue
@jcameron Feb 2022
Excellent song around a simple concept. Good choice of word for the challenge. Very listenable with the guitar and your voice.
@sunfire Feb 2022
Hey, I think this works really well. Good tune! Good wording!
@mikeb Feb 2022
'Close' - an excellent choice for the weekly challenge! Some nice phrases in this song.