I really like
Your brand new home
On the corner
Of First and Oak
The kitchen’s small
But it’ll do
I know everything about you
I know everything about you
Sorry to hear
Your Mom is sick
I’m sure that she
Will pull through this
You should see her
You’re overdue
I know everything about you
I know everything about you
I was celebrating your job
Before you knew you were hired
All of your quotes on Facebook
Have made me feel so inspired
Your new boyfriend
Seems like a dick
Such a dreadful
Profile pic
Looks like you chose
A real buffoon
I know everything about you
I know everything about you
I’d love to call you sometime
I’m sure that you’re missing me
But girl you changed your number
June 2nd, 2003
Last week you saw
Bruce Springsteen live
I know you had
An awesome time
Section 19
Row A, Seat 2
I know everything about you
I know everything about you
I know everything about you
I know everything
@jeffjweir Feb 2022
This is a VERY good song, Bractune. Listened three times while singing along in my head and it was a pleasure each time. Brilliant premise - that the classic romantic thought of “I wonder where you are” is now just so dead. (I’m even thinking you you could get away with not mentioning Facebook in the 1st bridge. Maybe realizing it would be fun for the listener.)
The lyrics flow smoothly with the melody without feeling sing-songy. The intro and transition arrangements are awesome and the chords throughout sound excellent.
I can’t figure out if I don’t like or really love Verse 3 where you change up and use coarse words (dick, buffoon) instead of the smooth words you use in all the other parts. Might be easier to tell with a vocal. And if you’d like to go with Aaron’s thought, just send me the track and I’d be glad to put a demo vocal on it for you .
@aaroneis Feb 2022
Sorry, “@Jeffjweir singing this”
@aaroneis Feb 2022
This isn’t creepy. This is a great love song! I mean, the guy really cares enough to know all these things.
Seriously, this is in the “good” dark creepy song category (unlike “Cruel Holiday” *sniff*).
I love the melody in the B/chorus section. I could totally see @jeffjwier singing this.
@yewnorker Feb 2022
I think it's great! I followed the piano line as I read the lyric. It's creepy in a "but you're not weird' sort of way!