I got down some chords and started stretching it out a bit and the words that came just felt pretty simple, as such songs go.
Guitar tuning: C#G#D#F#G#C# (or CGDFGC x77325, Capo 1)
I’m watching the sunshine
As it slides up the wall in my room
My sheets are clean and I’ve
brightened my scene with mop and broom
The only thing that feels better
Than coming home to you
Is you coming home to me
It means everything
I’m warming the oven
Listening to something so smooth and so tight
You ain’t gotta stay for this loving
But leaving will mean you won’t get it tonight
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
"My sheets are clean and I’ve brightened my scene with mop and broom" is such a great lyric; I love it when the mundane is made to sound super-poetic. Your voice sounds so rich and warm, and it really suits the mellow tones of the music. Enjoyed this a lot!
@suehaney Feb 2022
I like your interesting jazzy chords and the laid back groove of it. I hope the person does stay!