Feb 2022
2am note that i turned into a larger song
I tried to sleep at ten last night
I tried to sleep at ten
But I was too busy thinking about
When I might see you again
And I ask myself if you could hurt me
If you wanted to
I think you could
That’s something that you’ll have to choose
One day you can tell me about how
You sleep at night
Holding a gun
One day you can tell me about how
You sleep at night
Holding a gun
One day I can tell you about how
I pick my battles
Just for fun
One day I can tell you about why
When you ask about it
I freeze up
I tried to use my time so wise
I tried to use my time
I’m a long list of commitments
I am everyone’s but mine
I ask myself if anyone
Could make a better call
I’d much prefer to hang out and
Draw pictures on your walls
You told me that I’m good enough
You told me that I’m good
Ive lived far too many other lives
Where Ive misunderstood
I’m trusting at my core
I’m breaking even more
@vomvorton Feb 2022
Excellent chorus and some more really potent emotional, powerful lyrics. Getting some Mitski vibes from the verse melody and then the chorus is heavier and grungier, really good stuff!
@adforperu Feb 2022
Oooh that's a tasty progression, shades of grunge in there. There's some real drama in the performance here, that's really cool. With all the dark lyrics about holding a gun, the line "I’d much prefer to hang out and draw pictures on your walls" really jumped out at me
@richaaaay Feb 2022
I like the simplicity of this. Great harmonies. Catchy chorus.
@mattwdunn Feb 2022
This has a Weezer Blue album feel. I’d love to hear this with a 90s alt rock backing. Your voice would be so well suited.