Feb 2022 ballad
In the twilight
and into the night.
Our days are numbered,
though the stars are bright.
We could have had
a little more time -
if not for fools
with their greedy minds.
Dawn is breaking,
the day begins.
Shed sunlight on corruption,
expose the sins.
We could have had
a little more time -
if not for fools
with their greedy minds.
Capitalists and autocrats
will be the death of us all.
The world needs to work together
before we fall.
We could have had
a little more time -
if not for fools
with their greedy minds.
@coolparadiso Mar 2022
nice holding percussion and then the intro of other instrumentation. another interesting lyric that has some depth but tries to shake its darkness but that capitalists and autocrats says a lot
@didge345 Feb 2022
Love this Phil. The clock is certainly ticking. Flawless. :-)
@resonut123 Feb 2022
Wow, strong lyric with the nice mellow music and very smooth vocal delivery. Greed is a Major problem. Well done Phil.
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
Both lovely poetry in the lyrics and message in the lyrics. The gentle delivery is perfect. The strings, piano, and shaker create a great stage for the perfect vocals.
@truetone Feb 2022
This is beautiful! I love your voice! Great melody too.