Feb 2022 fuc
hunched over shoudlers head down
pacing round and round
looking at the ground
hows that sound
are they wound up on the inside
self doubt would reside
would you put your faith in that person
i cant decide
all my life i felt invisible
tended to stay in the back
but when i did this
i felt invincible
all because i
straightened my back
one day my opportunity will show up
i used to say that
but now good fortune approaches me
abundantly all because I
straightened my back
the world will judge on how you carry yourself
unless your married to wealth take heed
the folks you may meet will only get
a split second to quick reckon whether
youre even up to speed
all my life i felt invisible
tended to stay in the back
but when i did this
i felt invincible
all because i
straightened my back
one day my opportunity will show up
i used to say that
but now good fortune approaches me
abundantly all because I
straightened my back
@odilongreen Feb 2022
I really like the semi-rap, semi-beatnik feel to this, with the uke strumming and your assured but relaxed vocals. Toe-tapping and very cool (both overall and almost in a jazzy fingers-snapping sense)!
@kahlo2013 Feb 2022
This is a great back beat and lyrical delivery. I like the message that demonstrates the power in how we carry ourselves and portray ourselves. Straightening your back is a wonderfully literal example and a great metaphor.
@corinnecurcio Feb 2022
I relate to this on a purely personal and physical level: I've hurt my back several times, and at the end of usually a week, when I am better, I feel like myself again and can do what I want - and in a way, am invincible, not prey to the frailties of my body.
I like the visual of straightening your back, and not being "spineless" and fearful. The easy going music fits so well
@vainhirvain Feb 2022
I like the way you lay the text out rhythmically. With those little streches and all. Nice job! Good posture is important, that is true, not just for what impression you give but also for your body to be able to relax and function well.
@anthonykapfer666 Feb 2022
this is cool! and it's impressive that you wrote so many lyrics in such a short time. nice work
@jibbidy34 Feb 2022
I love this!! How true is this. It resonates with me as someone who has done just that. Your phrasing and meter is just awesome. I’m such a fan of your simplistic yet powerful style. I would so buy your album!