Meanwhile I'm not a huge fan of happier music, this feels right. It just needs to fly a bit higher. Like, this has so much potential, to be elaborated into something much bigger. If only one song from you, this might be the one to develope further.
You've got the makings of a chart hit here! A bit of fleshing out, maybe a couple of "stand up for the chorus" moments, and you'll be beating 'em of with a stick!
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@metalfoot Mar 2022
This is the bouncy feel good piece I was needing to hear today. Great stuff :)
@nancycunning Mar 2022
Ooooh. I like that. It feels like a happy, wandering love song.
If you were looking for lyrics, they might convey something like:
I don't care where we're going today, long as I'm going with you
(Well, that's what I heard when I held your conch shell to my ear and listened)
@povosos Feb 2022
Meanwhile I'm not a huge fan of happier music, this feels right. It just needs to fly a bit higher. Like, this has so much potential, to be elaborated into something much bigger. If only one song from you, this might be the one to develope further.
@dragondreams Feb 2022
You've got the makings of a chart hit here! A bit of fleshing out, maybe a couple of "stand up for the chorus" moments, and you'll be beating 'em of with a stick!