This one is an idea I've had sitting in my book for a while, but never written. Today it felt like the right time and the whole thing flopped out in an hour, cliches and all.
Like all the songs here, it still needs plenty of work, but it's almost done
@kenmattsson Feb 2022
Might "have a lot of cliches" but it's a nice story and you tell it well. There's a lot of good in this one.
@gregwere Feb 2022
Yes, lovely picking - rhythmical, lovely imagery. Nice work.