I have an idea to try to bounce to a major chorus from a more minor filled verse. The transitions are awkward
Sink Buried down and deep into the darkness
Sink you use to wash your hands of all of this mess
Down and out and Down for anything
Down the hall
Sinking down into the groud so far now you know that you've got nowhere to fall
I know you've buried in your chest
the treasure you invested
And I know you tried your best to keep it under wraps
When you made the joke in jest
you gave up all your secrets
Tried to find a safe you need to keep your cloak and dagger
press your palms until you need a pulse with a beat
You have everything you need
you gave up all your secrets
@cblack Feb 2022
This is really nice. Kind of emo, in a good way. Sounds very heartfelt. I like it. :)
@dock Feb 2022
Wow that chorus is tight! The visuals of the verses are great. This would be great with a band. But your guitar carries it really well. Good one!