this might be my weirdest song yet
open the door and let it in
self doubt and hatred welcome again
I know just why you're here
you've come to listen to my song
well I made it for you
yes only you
pour some tea out have a chat
and then we can relax
with your sighs on my back
I keep going
I spill tea all over, all over my pants
so I get a new pair
they're my ones with dancing cats
and I get laughed at
"you know it's unbecoming to laugh"
"you know it's rude to assume"
"you know I hate that about you"
and embarassment fumes
but the next day I get up
and face them head on
"would you like some tea?"
I say nonchalantly
to not appear weak
@dukongp100 Apr 2022
i love the emphatic feel you have to all these songs. this one has a great dancing orchestra behind it. it really works with your vocal delivery, i really like the sound of your voice and how it fits with the instrumentation. ive noticed the chord progression is very well constructed with the melodic changes and the arpeggios add a real tasty element to this!
@unpronounceable Feb 2022
I love your artwork (Off-topic, I know but I had to say it). Your intro/outro is so pleasant. I like the phrase "Your sighs on my back". This is a sweet painting of a song.
@wylddandelyon Feb 2022
I love that intro and outro bit, it's so cheerful and, well, simple isn't the right word, but the clear tones and joyous melody made me happy.
The music around the words is more jumbled and complicated, like the words themselves. I think it evokes the same feelings as the words do, so mission accomplished there!