Feb 2022
Did you think I would not see?
Clouded by the subtlety?
The friendly kissing
There's something missing
It's clear to me.
The tender looks that once were there,
Now replaced with vacant stares.
A touch so cool
Leaves me a fool who's
Hanging in mid-air.
Got to think we've hit a wall.
Will we sink and lose it all?
Don't you know,
You're leaving me in Freefall?
Sinking fast through silent airs
Falling free without a prayer
Don't you care,
You're leaving me in Freefall?
@cloudrifter Feb 2022
the lyrics, the instrumentation, the vibe.. all gives me very much a lounge-song feeling. some Sinatra swagger to the vocals would probably elevate this song even more. the sax is right on and the vocal harmonies at the end were also great! more!
@smiley Feb 2022
I like the background music, it is like a fusion of jazz and soul. Lots of fun effects in it. Cool sax(?) solo. Good insight into another's experience. Good rhymes and flow. Very nice, keep FAWMing on!