Looking for feedback. The lyrics are gibberish/nonsensical but don't care. Just need some fresh ears to listen and tell me what to improve for my next project. Thanks in advance.
In the FAWM tradition, I'm not going to focus on things to improve, rather tell you the things I like.
I like everything.
You've got a really strong melody that really fills out with the doubled guitar lines. You've got interesting guitar sounds and some cool background textures. Your vocal is just fantastic, and I'll be watchlisting you so I can hear more of it.
As for the lyrics, they maybe gibberish, but they fit the song really well. Don't change them. Stipe wouldn't have.
Great song, I loved it.
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@bethkille Feb 2022
This is great! Super strong production. Has a vibe similar to The Cure. Love the melody. I think the stream of consciousness lyric totally works here.
@happyholiday Feb 2022
@ayehahmur thank you thank you, you're so kind. Thank you for your feedback. You put a smile on my face.
@ayehahmur Feb 2022
In the FAWM tradition, I'm not going to focus on things to improve, rather tell you the things I like.
I like everything.
You've got a really strong melody that really fills out with the doubled guitar lines. You've got interesting guitar sounds and some cool background textures. Your vocal is just fantastic, and I'll be watchlisting you so I can hear more of it.
As for the lyrics, they maybe gibberish, but they fit the song really well. Don't change them. Stipe wouldn't have.
Great song, I loved it.