Now we're heading in to the FAWM Overflow phase.
This is where I make lots of short songs for no reason. Because I'm not trying so hard any more.
Cue drums, two one-shot guitar tracks, and one vocal track with lyrics penned on the fly.
I... I don't think it's all that bad, actually.
Garden Jane, she never goes away
Here to stay
Beneath the blooming orchards
Cherry ripe
She licks the blood red from your
Shivering lips
As she pulls you right down in to the soil
Ghost teeth, soul grip
Swallowing everything you have to give
Garden Jane
You know she died here
Sixteen years ago today
Garden Jane
There are so many bones
So many bones today
@miga Feb 2022
You're right, it's pretty good. I'm impressed that you can 'pen' lyrics like this on the fly and make a cohesive song like this one.
@cblack Feb 2022
Nice sedate rock. Plenty of attitude, but restrained. I like it. :)
@thedutchwidows Feb 2022
That rhythm guitar part immediately grabbed me, and I really like the drums having that slight buried feel. Suited the lyrics somehow.