Feb 2022 music
Just an experiment. Needs a rewrite and a new recording, but there is something there.
Don’t believe your eyes, they will lie up to the skies
They are never true and change reality
Don’t believe your mind, know it isn’t very kind
Distorting every single thought you have
Can you hear me through the weather
Standing ten feet tall
Don’t even trust your hands, though I know you think you can
Remember - what you touch, it isn’t there
Can you hear me through the weather
Standing ten feet tall
You will never lose it ever
Can you hear it all
If you believe my voice leave and never lose your choice
Words have led the best of us astray
@elainedimasi Mar 2022
The "can you hear me" appeal works so well in this one. The music is part of it and the touch of extra reverb also. The verse line that gave me that "grabbed by the shirt pocket" feeling is, "though I know you think you can" .. who is there who wouldn't have to say, "Guilty!!"
@nagavaeoe Feb 2022
I have to say the tag grabbed me on this one.
As usual, just a great song. The ideas are so clear and ready for refinement. Absolutely love the guitar solo section. So sweet.
@fuzzy Feb 2022
This is a demo??
Sounds like a finished track to me.
I always admire people who re-record their stuff; I know when I make em I'm never going to revisit em.
No discipline.
Oh, ASTRAY.
I thought it was ASHTRAY.
Whoops.
I like how it kicks off and gets right in to it.
As usual, I'm loving your lyrics.
Great vocal melody in the chorus.
Oh yes that guitar solo.
I sure do love me an active bass line.
Yes, enjoyed muchly.
@sph Feb 2022
Oh yes, there's something there. Even your sketches are full fledged experiences
@mikeb Feb 2022
Some solid power pop-rock on this one! Definitely worth returning to!
@danvaillancourt Feb 2022
Great melody, vocals and rock and roll arrangement.
@fonte Feb 2022
This is really cool. Definitely definitely something here. Sounds pretty darn brilliant to me. Love the jangly guitar sound. Vocal melody is killer