what a simple rule we have to follow
it's incredible it hasn't yet made me hollow
i find it so so easy to wallow
but that does nothing but break it
and you were sat below a tree
it felt like i was ending
it was far too loud in there, i had to be free
so you picked me up by my roots
you placed me beside you
and we had our very own story
from start to finish
and now
its over
its over now
i'll miss you like,
like i miss eating bread
without a consequence
without a consequence
@nancyrost Feb 2022
Gorgeous progression - simple, but slightly odd and moody. The insistent guitar and atmospheric backing vocals are hypnotic. "I miss you like I miss eating bread without a consequence" is quite an arresting line.
@bfwaite Feb 2022
I love your arrangement. Feels like this is absolutely a tv or movie soundtrack. The whole mood you create is so layered, rich, and sentimental.
@izaakalexander Feb 2022
This is really haunting--- the harmony is rich and moves unexpectedly to that second chord (a minor iv maybe?) so I'm immediately interested and focused--- I enjoy your vocal delivery, and the freedom of the lyrical form.
@ampersandman Feb 2022
Wow. Great song. Love the chord sequence and the arrangement.
@sunnymae Feb 2022
This is beautiful. Truly. I love the build into the lyric. Distant voices echoing in the background. An effortless stream of sonic deliciousness. What a beautiful flow. I wouldn't change a thing.