For my one true Valentine since 2003.
Would you be my valentine
the one who would redefine
My quivering centreline
and make me feel super fine
I'd kiss your neck everyday
commit to you my fiance
surrender all right away
our love would not wear away
Mondays would feel extrafine
like laying in the morning sun
I would tell everyone
that you are my number one
So, would you be my valentine
the one who would redefine
my quivering centreline
and make me feel extra fine
@janice Feb 2022
Absolutely dreamy, nostalgic feel
@scruffyblues Feb 2022
Dreamy and sweet as honey. What else??
@tunecat Feb 2022
You capture the mood here wonderfully. The rhyme scheme is fun and in this context seems fitting. So sweet.
@tunecat Feb 2022
You capture the mood here wonderfully. The rhyme scheme is fun and in this context seems fitting. So sweet.
@andygriff Feb 2022
What a feast this is. Loving the backing here - so atmospheric, almost a bit 70's sounding. "my quivering centreline" - what a line! The delicate vocal is irresistible. Well done indeed! :D
@franniezest Feb 2022
This sounds like it should be in an old glamorous black and white movie!!! That extra fine morning sun melody hits especially well! Great song :)
@richaaaay Feb 2022
Perfect sentiment for a Valentine’s Day song. Beautiful singing and a sweet melody.
@twyllodrus Feb 2022
Well and who wouldn't be after song like that being written for them? This is really lovely. Hope your other half is truly flattered.